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 Posted: Thu Aug 4th, 2016 13:09
Robert



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malcolmsowdon wrote:
Have taken onboard critique of last post and agree with wholeheartedly so replaced fire & Created ash in hearth.More critiqe please !!!

Now we are cooking!

Perhaps the only other thing I might suggest is that, as the saying goes... There is no smoke without fire, usually the reverse is also true. The area behind the kettle seems to be fully saturated, no signs of heat shimmer or loss of saturation of the background behind the kettle, as there probably would be if wood was burning on the fire.

Good luck with the competition!



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